Haha pathetic...I wrote this a long time ago.
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There she sits, all alone
No one to talk to; no one knows
Jocks tease her, pull her hair
Cheerleaders just like to stare
She drops her books right there
To no surprise, no one cares
Never has spoken a word
Freak, reject, loser; they call her "The Nerd"

Confined in her own world, she lays
They've kept her buried alive all these days
No one heard the screams or the yelps
Absolutely no one heard her shrieks for help
She stares up at the ceiling as she fears
They're shouting, fighting; coming near
Pain wells inside of her
She knew who they were

Same, boring, ordinary day
The jocks see her and come out to play
She's been waiting for this in years
Her heart beats faster as they drew near
Tick-tock-tick-tock is what's ahead
Laughing, squealing like pigs, she smiles
She looks up, one last thing she sees are stone tiles
She rips open her jacket to find
The very reason they say she was out of her mind

Its a good poem.. too many ppl undervalue their talents these days.. if you consider that pathetic, then I'd love to read what you consider good

Hehe aww thanks! I meant bad as in the words are third-grade rhymes. Heh.

I...don't...get...the...last...stanza....
But I love how it rhymed and was so full of depth at the same time.

Aww That's really good, Kath!!!!

whoa! did she blow 'em away? kamikaze style? again i see a clip in my head. maybe i should start directing, and u become my scriptwriter. and my girlfri-- i mean co-director! yea help me uh...direct. eheh.

Yep she did. Really? Woo. I didn't know they were that descriptive. Thank you.

wow! LOVED the rhymes

Reminds me of freshman year...

Aww.. that was cool.

Except.. I don't get the last stanza either.. Explain please? I wanna know the ending x_x

There you go, Eve.

thats really good, and it's something a lot of people can relate to, including me but its a really good poem..nice job