hey ppl tell me what you think of this Poem.....




This city has no people...

But...

The light burning in the homes...

Is warm and bright.

I am in a city with no people...

But I'm not sad or lonely.

My heart glows.

I am one of them, but I still feel warm inside.

That's because I love this person.

The heart of someone who's...

In love...

Whether that person is alive or not...

Is kind and warm.

If my heart is this warm...

If I can be this happy...

Then I wish that all those like me can fall in love...

And that all of them will have their love returned.

The love we feel may not be the same...

But it doesn't matter when I'm with the someone just for me.

If we can all find that special person..

Then the world will be a most joyous place.

Then...

This city...

Will have no unhappy people.

It's the special city that has...

The someone just for me.

this should be in Writing

^yes
someone move this

I hope you're not going to claim that as your own because I recognize that from Chobits.

I Chobits.

Moved to Writing.

^ yea that's what i was thinking... but i don't know if it was the exact things said in chobits, or if it was just inspired by it

It's great, but it's not yours :)

Taylor``