My heart goes out
To the one in pain
She's sitting there
crying her tears that
Stream down her face like acid
She's so sad

Her eyes are red
She cries and whimpers
Remembering all the good times
That she had with him

He's never going to
Open his eyes again
His heart's not beating it's lively tune
It saddens me,

Seeing her crying here
It's not her fault
It was just his time

May he rest in peace.

i like it
its sad.

all your stuff is sad..
why not write a happy one for once
i would like to see how it is..

although most of your poems are good as well
but i really actually like this poem..
so good job

I love it .. depressing

Its rad <3 :-)