kinda sloppy could of used better brushes but here it is:

That looks pretty good.I don`t like the girl brush though and I don`t think you should of chosen red for the font stroke color.I like the green stuff around the image though.

took the words out of my mouth :x

I don't really like the image quality ^ x3 on what they said.

i dont like the green outline thingy. its too random, same with the brush... its a cute idea tho, and did you colorize that? its a pretty ok skin color

i agree with her. i dont like the green stuff too much.and i think theres too much going on.the checkered things uhm the opactiy can be lowered a smidge.i dont htink that girl brush should be there either.this is okay.i like what you are doing.