Post up some of your haikus so that everyone can see them. They can be about whatever you want (keep them clean please, PG-13).



Just in case you don't know what a Haiku is, it's common format consist of a poem that has 5 syllables in first line, 7 syllables the second, and 5 syllables the third. Here's an example one that I wrote a couple of months ago (it's longer, well it's not a Haiku, just a combination of three.):

Breaking Loose
by NatiMarie

Trembling silence
Fear of breaking the tether
My inwardness lives

Botheration kills
Cringing while venerating
Sluing in my pit

Binging fearfulness
Terminating hope, now gone
Accruing demise

^ Yeah, I wrote a poem like that expecting it was a haiku. Turns out it wasn't. So yeah...

Here's one off the top of Jose's head:

Infidelity
Is the main reason that she
Comes home very late.

I dunno. lol.

- Chinkieeyedpnoi

I like, Jose. Hmm...I should make one up right now.

We'll die together
Do not worry, I'm not scared
Because you love me

Haha sad, I know...here's another one I just thought up right now:

One day I shall rule
I'll punish all the meanies
They'll all burn and die

(That one was for Kim)

First one:

Why can't you see
The painful tears in my eyes
As you walked away

Second one:
We live together
On this silly little world
That some called the earth

lol the first reflected my feelings not so long ago, and the second was just pure randomness, or as I like to call it, randomosity ^___^

i have one! haha it was stupid it was when i was mad at my mother and was in creative thinking mode

My room was messy
my mom told me to clean it,
and now im grounded.


and thats the truth!

mine is realllie weird and it might not make any sense cus i dont got the mood to think lols haha

you are so stupid
because i really hate you
and you are dummy

hahahaha... sorry for the dumb haiku haha

hmm another one

you are cute and i...
i like you like you like me
cus i reallie do
.
.
.
i know thats soo weird hahaha

fourty-five houses
none of them have seen a day
take that, GW

nerd day is a sham
descrimination is bad
i love nerds so much!

children laugh at jokes
but not at the ones i tell
stupid kids should die

party at nikki's
don't forget t bring the booze
Xs on my hands

on the carpet in
andrews room their is dried up
puke from two weeks past

mathiew is a jerk
and he thinks he is so cool
he peed on the couch

my back is itchy
i will scratch it with a knife
hey my blood is red

i just made all those up. am i good or what?

haha that ones funny, ryfitaDF

mathiew is a jerk
and he thinks he is so cool
he peed on the couch

newais...

I love you lots, so....
please don't tell me that you changed
cus i will be sad

Here's this one:

Mowed the lawn today
It was my first time to sweat
In a long time, sad


OOOOOOOOOOOOH!

You Point Your Finger
I'd like to bite it off now
Why Are You So Rude?

Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
Whasa thisa?

I need a kleenex
Runny nose and tears
From you after years

those are cool. i some how findit hard to make my own. and i had to make some for me english class oh well points will be taken of