Wish I could say,
That the best of me stayed,
Like everything else,
It's gone away,
I was blind,
I was stupid,
To let chu get the best of me,
Now it's clear,
Now I see,
That the problem isn't you it's me.

I'll admit right now that this poem is where amatuer... but I was feeling like writing something childish and cheesy...

I didn't think it was tooo childish. But "chu", yeah.

I think that was pretty clear throughout the poem, so it's no surprise when you stated it at the end. This isn't really a poem .. it seems choppy, disconnected and redundant. I like the theme. Could be developed a bit more though.

Okay fine... it's actually part of a song. But I've written in a long time and when I do, I never seem to able to finish it. Look me up on the web @ www.CertifiedMusic.com or my other artists... www.LindaLow.com or www.NatalieOei.com