alphanumeric
Apr 3 2006, 10:51 PM
I've become vulnerable. Attached. Baby, you're making me gag. I see you turn the corner and I wanna run, hide, anything. But I stay. All for you. Honey, I'm yours! And I swore I wouldn't be easy this time..but I find myself once more leaning on a fence bound to break. I'm on my balcony again. See how it fits into everything? My balcony, my retreat. Sugar, you're just a dream come true and I'm your nightmare at last. Opposites attract never seemed so..what is it, love? Unfriendly? Pup you don't know the rest of it.
KissMe2408
Apr 4 2006, 02:08 AM
Your writing has an interesting twist in it that I like.
I hope to see more!
ranniel
Apr 4 2006, 07:54 PM
QUOTE(KissMe2408 @ Apr 4 2006, 1:08 AM)

Your writing has an interesting twist in it that I like.
I hope to see more!
no, no more - her writing is so awesome I just can't stop myself from reading.