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chaneun
I'm just another LIFELESS CORPSE
SUICIDE is my only option
Life is PAINFUL
DEATH is painless
CUTTING is my doctor
-swishes hair-
I CRINGE AND SCREAM AS I'M BURIED INTO THE PAIN AND ANGUISH
RIPPING OPEN MY HEART THE BLOOD SPILLS ON THE FLOOR
POURING AND POURING I LAY THERE ON THE DESK TRYING TO MURMUR MY LAST FEW WORDS
OF THE PAIN YOU CAUSED, OF ALL THE HELL YOU PUT ME THROUGH
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I've capitalized words that make this "poem" sound emo. -eCuts-
juliar
omg thats really good
5 stars!
ANG33ZY
word. it's real good cause i wrote the last 4 lines
chaneun
^Well are you emo like me?

NO!
nightmare4taki
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Smoogrish
shut up christine, i'm more emo than you are. -eCuts rapidly-

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this is hilarious.
smearedmakeup
OMG, this is hilarious.
*eCuts a heart on my wrist*
Isn't it beautiful?

You deserve a flower for being so emo. :D
alphanumeric
Ew, EMO.
Do people even know what it is? NO!
Just call it the new fad. >:[
Gaah, no offense to anyone.
ecargnmyst
lol..my writings also dark and "emo" but i am NOT emo hmph >:[ and heres to prove that biggrin.gifbiggrin.gifbiggrin.gif
illumineering
As I Lay Dying is the title of a William Faulkner book. That's not an emo title.
Blow_Don't_SUCK
^Christine is ignorant.


Christine is this about your crush liking a hoe?
xstab.my.heartx
holy hell, that's emo :P


good job

QUOTE(illumineering @ Mar 28 2006, 3:30 AM) *
As I Lay Dying is the title of a William Faulkner book. That's not an emo title.


It's also an emo-screamo band. biggrin.gif
radhikaeatsraman
Christine, you're the next NY Times bestseller. "Confessions of an Emo."
Paradox of Life
QUOTE(xstab.my.heartx @ Mar 29 2006, 7:13 PM) *
holy hell, that's emo :P
good job
It's also an emo-screamo band. biggrin.gif


As I Lay Dying isn't emo-screamo... it's a Christian band labeled as 'hardcore'. But I hate that word too much, so I'm just going to say hard rock. I just don't believe it's emo.

And that was a very emo poem. -cries and eCuts-
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