This wasn't supposed to happen
I shouldn't feel the way I do about you
These days, I scarcely smile
But because of you, my smile isn't yet extinct.
My heart beats warm whenever I'm around you,
And even when I just hear your name
I feel dizzy,
And I just love that feeling.
You say you don't like
That other girl anymore
So maybe that means...
No..probably not.
But I just can't help but think
That you're in love with me too.
I'm such an idealist
My fantasies will never become reality.
Such a sweet soul you are.
I haven't felt this way about anyone else before,
Baby, you've got my heart.
I just wish I could have yours.

whoa, sierra too much poems from you. If i were you'd try to do something minimal, its just a suggestion.

^^Well, that's a suggestion about future poems. How about this one??

I really think this sounds great. I don't have any critique/suggestions.

aw, thanks.

awe, its cute

I love this poem. It's the perfect description of that silly little thing called love. And its personal which is what I like about it the most

thanks!!! <3