CUTEBUNNY160
Mar 22 2006, 08:00 PM
Beloved Mother
The image of my mother
My greatest love
A love compared to no other
Always brought us closer together
She is my beloved woman
My mother
The beauty in your eyes
I could never forget
From the skies
An angel fell
Very much loved and respected
And even though times are cruel
I will always have you in my heart
Not even death can separate us
My love for you will always go on
She said to me than in life
We have to try our hardest
She showed me the way to the right path
My dream is to love her for an eternity
And to go back to the time I was a little boy
And to love and be loved by her again
IceCream4U
Mar 22 2006, 08:15 PM
Omg...is this a true story???
Well...writing-wise, its another very-well written poem. Like I told you, I'm a huge fan!
CUTEBUNNY160
Mar 22 2006, 08:40 PM
nah it isn't true
i just though the story up

and thank you for the lovely compliment
IceCream4U
Mar 22 2006, 08:56 PM
Oh, OKAY GOOD!
I wanted to cry!

Have you noticed people get very emotional from your poems? (Good thing)
CUTEBUNNY160
Mar 22 2006, 09:52 PM
^ thank you
but i don't get it
my poems seem crappy to me
IceCream4U
Mar 22 2006, 10:25 PM
Come on`, be more confident in yourself!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CUTEBUNNY160
Mar 22 2006, 11:00 PM
^lol thanks to you i am
RiddleMeWonders
Mar 23 2006, 12:51 AM
I liked it.
Very nice.
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