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CUTEBUNNY160
Beloved Mother

The image of my mother
My greatest love
A love compared to no other
Always brought us closer together

She is my beloved woman
My mother
The beauty in your eyes
I could never forget

From the skies
An angel fell
Very much loved and respected

And even though times are cruel
I will always have you in my heart
Not even death can separate us
My love for you will always go on

She said to me than in life
We have to try our hardest
She showed me the way to the right path

My dream is to love her for an eternity
And to go back to the time I was a little boy
And to love and be loved by her again
IceCream4U
Omg...is this a true story???

Well...writing-wise, its another very-well written poem. Like I told you, I'm a huge fan!
CUTEBUNNY160
nah it isn't true
i just though the story up laugh.gif
and thank you for the lovely compliment happy.gif
IceCream4U
Oh, OKAY GOOD!
I wanted to cry! cry.gif

Have you noticed people get very emotional from your poems? (Good thing)
CUTEBUNNY160
^ thank you
but i don't get it
my poems seem crappy to me pinch.gif
IceCream4U
Come on`, be more confident in yourself!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CUTEBUNNY160
^lol thanks to you i am happy.gif
RiddleMeWonders
I liked it.
Very nice.
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