I'm (re)new here. A lot of what I say doesn't make sense so just ignore anything you don't get. With that being said..

COME ON, CHINA DOLL.
I am (sort of; maybe; just barely) sorry that I am apatheic to your sensivitiy. Your immaturity does not impress me & to be honest it flatters you in the least possible way. So suave, wrapped up in brilliance. Do not lie. You're nothing short of inanity in it's truest form. Left, right, left right we march like soldiers. Don't mess up don't you dare skip a beat. They're all watching you sweat it out knowing you're capable of nothing.
They're laughing. How does that make you feel?
Come on, china doll! Crack.
They play with you then shatter you into a million pieces.
You're forgotten. How does that make you feel?
Come on, baby. Drop down and surrender.
This is all just a little game
& we're winning.
So just give up
just give up, my baby.

Hello =)
This is art<3
DUH?

^^Haha, yes duh.

That was awesome!! But right now I have a feeling I'm reading too much into it..right now I'm like, "The China doll symbolises human life, and all the struggles with it - the struggles with you, others, and your environment."

Thanks guys!

Ah Ice Cream 4 U (name?!) I love that you read into it like that. It's what I want to happwn. I am just using china doll as symbolism for a girl who breaks easy under pressure and cares about what other people think. But I like how you interpreted it!

and Hello! Shes_Out..I'm Jackie what's your nameeee? =]

^^Haha yay, I was on a broader subject. Awesomeness. *goes to read poem again*

Yes, I get it now. I like that - its something we can all relate to.
And BTW, my name is Sierra. =D

i like ur poem and what its message. i think its how im feeling right now =\

this is really good. it reminds me of my "march" but it's got a different idea behind it.

good job.

Hello to you (;
Let me be real right now,
SAWWWP, I'm Nikki<3 [:

Wow, great job with this!
I wanted to read more! Very interesting...good choice of words too.
great work