I don't know. This definately isn't one of my better works. I think I'm getting writer's block.

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a heart beating
faster as it goes
a wisper
a touch
a kiss with eyes closed
a dream awake
as the room turns from white
oh, things will never be the same...

as the colors change.

it sounds good. i see nothing wrong with it, its very abstract.

Ooh, I like it. From the beginning to "a kiss with eyes closed" is my favorite part. :3

Something about it is very...strong I don't know what to say about it...let me think of the words...........................................................................
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Ah, yes. It makes me imagine I'm standing in a hallway, just looking at a painting as it changes colors...I love it - its short and sweet!
--->Sierra