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azn_at_heart
i know i make mistakes in my writing but im too lazy to
go and fix it and puntuation is found too troublesome to me
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its valentines day and im all alone
so after school im going straight home
valentines the day for people who are in love
and where some people were shoved
to confess the truth and what they think
to begin creating their own special link
all those couples i keep seeing everywhere in front of me
makes it so i cant stop but feel jealousy
every year there is a small pain within my heart
every time it feels like its very slowly ripping apart
valentines is just a big reminder to me
of how lonely my life can really be
i been patient and waited for my love that will be true
but thinking that afterwards i wouldnt know what to do
its days like this that makes me want to cry
and makes me think that i wont have someone till i die
seeing others happy like that makes me sad and depressed
but i honor the ones who gathered courage and confessed
so i hope to the people who found what i have not
to make their relationship the very best with all the got
rainnydaiis
Its simplicity makes it nice...
Nice topic too...
Many heart breaks and stuff happen on valentines
Guess you got most of the heart breaks down
azn_at_heart
well acually i never really got a girl or something like that but its cus of that, that my jealousy is much bigger than u think
rainnydaiis
Jealousy and Hate are one of the feelings that led to a lot of great poems... But don't let it get to you too much because once your swallowed in it.. Then its nearly impossible to come out.
seriouslynikki
i love it.
its how i feel..:]
azn_at_heart
well the affect of valentines still linger on......
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