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azn_at_heart
Jan 1 2006, 04:01 AM
you have always been my best friend
someone who understands the messenges i send
its like when im hurt, you would heal
for your problems ill help you learn to deal
your someone that makes me happier to be with
all i want is to tell you this
that there is no greater friend out there
cus the greatest is with me right here
i only want you to be happy
i dont care if that means to not be with me
your emotions show me your more beautiful than the rest
thats why to me your considered the very best
being "girlfriend" and "boyfriend" means theres a chance to break-up
somtimes its fate and sometimes its luck
if we take the chance it means, never be the same again
never back to you being my best friend
i dont want to take the chance if it means i might lose you
i dont want that and you should convince me if u want to
sharpandcuddly
Jan 1 2006, 08:36 PM
Took me a while to read because I'm so used to full words, (as opposed to u and so on), but I like it a lot. It's got some real meaning in it.
KissMe2408
Jan 2 2006, 08:44 AM
QUOTE
being "gf" and "bf" means theres a chance to break-up
somtimes its fate and sometimes its luck
if we take the chance it means, never be the same again
never back to u being my best friend
i dont want to take the chance if it means i might lose u
i dont want that and u hav to convince me if u want to

^so true, that ending was great. I think we've all been there before, or have known someone atleast that felt that way lol.
Wonderful job :) Keep writing
azn_at_heart
Jan 8 2006, 02:07 AM
thx for always commenting me ^-^ ure always so very nice
akjsd
Jan 8 2006, 11:33 PM
its a good poem. i think it would be even better if you used proper spelling, instead of ure or u .. especially the ure, because it got kinda confusing .
azn_at_heart
Jan 9 2006, 11:17 PM
k its jus that i always post writing lik that.......so ill stop when it comes to my work then.......srry it got u confused a bit.........now to edit it
lil_chubby_cheeks2
Jan 9 2006, 11:21 PM
lol i agree with lidoxangie

but the poem was touching. lol it sounds weird but yeah..
blahblahblah77
Jan 14 2006, 08:18 AM
i can totally relate to this right now
shit dude it make me think about everything
and its makin me eyes tear up
i absolutely love it
MiLKDUD_DOKiE
Jan 18 2006, 07:58 PM
Aww lol i love the poem,
Being "girlfriend" and "boyfriend" means theres a chance to break-up
somtimes its fate and sometimes its luck
if we take the chance it means, never be the same again
never back to you being my best friend

So true..
synthase
Jan 26 2006, 04:48 PM
i love your writing <333
cant wait for more
azn_at_heart
Jan 27 2006, 08:00 PM
well im not that good and i dont really have time to write anymore cuase of school and sudden more assignments srry
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