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Mikael
Tell me your name and I'll tell you a story
It begins with a man looking out the window
Yes, this story is about me, and its about you too
I saw you out in the court yard while I was in class
My note book was out, but instead of notes
I wrote this short story so I can slide it in your locker
Now that you've read this story, please
Tell me your name
not_your_average
that's adorable. especially this part:
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Tell me your name and I'll tell you a story

that was really unique. i like the concept and how it's just short and sweet. keep it up!
iNyCxShoRT
I like the first and the last line. Good job, keep up the good work. =]
chocolateaficionado
Nice. The "tell me your name and I'll tell you a story" sounds familiar..
I swore I've heard it before.

Edit | Yeah, 'Misfit' by Elefant.
KissMe2408
Ah, that's great =) I loved it.

"Now that you've read this story, please
Tell me your name. . ."

Awesome =)
sharpandcuddly
Wow, I love it. It's got a lot of emotion, and yes, the first and last lines are the best.
Mikael
QUOTE(The Corpse Bride @ Dec 21 2005, 10:13 PM)
Nice.  The "tell me your name and I'll tell you a story" sounds familiar.. 
I swore I've heard it before.

Edit |  Yeah, 'Misfit' by Elefant.
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i dont know who elefant is. i like elephants though. sorry for unintended copy of a line. great elefants think alike i guess.

i dont know, when i wrote the first line i was actually thinking about Wonder Years, when the theme song started out with "lend me your ear and i'll sing you a song"... or something like that.
lavadrugs
It's something new
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