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lilxroxy
天氣預報說明天寒流過境
外面天氣冷 但心更冷
眼中的淚水 讓眼前的一切變的如此模糊

今年的冬天比往常要冷
因為我的任性 兩敗俱傷
這一切 不再是誰的錯
如果當初有話直說 我們今天是否能夠面對彼此

坦白面對 對方的決定
實話實說 自己的感覺
如此簡單的表現 不該讓彼此為難
由於幼稚 無法諒解的態度
包容對方的能力 在一瞬間化為烏有

今年的冬天比往常要冷
因為你的固執 兩敗俱傷
這一切 不再是誰的錯
如果當初有話直說 我們今天是否能夠面對彼此

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my apologies.

the translation's gnna be terrible..but..

the weather forcasts says a cold current will arrive tomorrow
the weather outside is cold, but my heart is colder
the tears blurried my vision

this year's winter is colder than usual
because of my [willfulness], both of us are abused crazy.gif
this is no longer a matter of whose fault this is
if we have faced each other with our true feelings frankly, will we be able to face each other?

accept the other's decision openly
speak our own feelings truthfully
such simple actions shouldn't be make the other awkward
because of our immaturity and lack of understanding
the ability to endure the other vanished into thin air

this year's winter is colder than usual
because of your [stubborness], both of us are abused crazy.gif crazy.gif
this is no longer a matter of whose fault this is
if we have faced each other with our true feelings frankly, will we be able to face each other?
EddieV
I have no idea what that says....
Weird addiction
^ Lmao! you're not the only one.
-lana
^
xD Same here. I don't know what the topic is either. xD
anoniez
ahh sorry i only read simplified, i used to know traditional but i dont wanna struggle through all of that XD

from what i could read though, i like it =]
lolita kitty
The translated version is pretty cool. Good job, I like this.
sprezzatura
I like it, well, I can read Chinese.
One thing I don't really understand is how you relate the title of this poem to the cold weather, perhaps I have bad Chinese skills.
HybridCountdown5
heh, I'm sure the original is alot better^^
the translations pretty good tho
lilxroxy
Heh, it's just comparing the cold and empty feeling : P
Programmer
wow..even thoguht that's translated..it's pretty good
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