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azn_at_heart
now a days i have more than jus one friend
more people that i noe i can really depend
many of them i told my heart and soul
when somethings wrong they care to noe
even if most i havent meet one-on-one
its not really something that has to be done
i told all theres to tell and they understand
thats why i always want to give a helping hand
i really would try to do anything they ask
no matter what cus i want the friendship to last
i thought to care this much it has to be a soulmate
but i was wrong, to care this much doesnt hav to be fate
if they ask i question, ill never lie
and i hope to talk to them soon when we say "bye"
my heart feels better when someone would talk to it
and then now it feels very much more comforted
i truly speak from my heart when i say
that it make me happier when i speak to them any day
even small little words to me means alot
if i had a reason to be sad before then i forgot
i enjoy talking to my friends more than they think
and to help them there wouldnt be any depths i wont sink
KissMe2408
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i thought to care this much it has to be a soulmate
but i was wrong, to care this much doesnt hav to be fate

^That was my favorite part of the poem :) You did a nice job with this by the way.
If this poem was inspired by late experiences, then i'm glad that things are going better for you and you found people you can really trust and be yourself with :)
I'm truly happy for you.
Meanwhile, keep on writing.
NgocQuyen
wow that's really nice. seriously, i love that! you're really talented ^^ hehe, but what do you mean like your friends that you havent met one-on-one? _smile.gif
WHOngos144
wow, that's really good!
azn_at_heart
i mean friends that r friends online so i dont really get to meet them face-to-face as it means......but i didnt really have friends before so that helped me change even if its only online
and
its one of some poems that is about what im really thinking or happening.......others r bout ones that i only wish or hope for
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