racoons > you
Nov 30 2005, 02:47 PM
Sincerely, Me.
If you go introspective,
where does your outside go?
can you still be there
if no one sees you?
just part of the scenery
shadow, faded
real, yet intangible, yet infalibale
out of sight, out of mind?
i suppose not.
because, after all, hes out of sight
but i just wrote 'he'.
Out of mind, out of sight?
better, 'cus duh.
but, who do we see, right in front of us?
the guy who's there?
or the introinspection of himself
thrust out inwards?
or you?
where are you?
who are you?
are you?
You-
KissMe2408
Nov 30 2005, 02:52 PM
Ah I love the way you write your poems James.
Very Unique.
Sincerely, Me....wait..isn't that a song?
Eh, probably not, but it sounds familiar.
"but, who do we see, right infront of us?
the guy who's there?
or the introinspection of himself
thrust out inwards?"
-wonderful
racoons > you
Nov 30 2005, 03:00 PM
dear jamie, sincerely me, is a song by hellogoodbye... which i realized after i wrote this... i knew it sounded familiar.
thanks, katie
= )
oh.. poo. i spelt the topic title incorrectly.
*edits*
stephinika
Nov 30 2005, 10:57 PM
lovely work james. i quite like this one. i just love your style of writing.