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Yo I got a freestyle scholarship, cuz I graduate when I spit//
My bitches in the strawberry whip, got the other one on banana split//
Dammnn...Like sexual assaults, they be whipping them asses (get it???)//
Cuz I got the high-definition vision when I see my gucci sunglasses//
Shit's cold, need warmth to protect my shit, cuz my breath is burning//
Reason why I 'Stay Fly' is because the white cash i'm earningggg// (THATSS RITE!)
I'm back in the community, got the hot ladies surroundin my code//
If they say smoking gives you full cancer, just watch ya lungs explode!!//
Finished when the bullets soar in the air, pop and drop, and reload//
Cuz the numbers after my name '61992' is the Kangsta's area code!!//
Peep my shit, I like it when thugs get deeper into my shit//
Icey chain 'round my neck, just get someone to bring me a license kit!//
Ington
It would be better without the 'get it' gimmick. Also, many, if not all, of your metaphors make no sense.

But hey, nice try I guess.
nightmare4taki
QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Nov 18 2005, 9:19 PM)
Yo I got a freestyle scholarship, cuz I graduate when I spit//
My bitches in the strawberry whip, got the other one on banana split//

With a banana split you could say "no nuts no glory, My biography, damn right the true story". Damn that was hella cold, how do you come up with inconceivable lines such as these.

QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Nov 18 2005, 9:19 PM)
Dammnn...Like sexual assaults, they be whipping them asses (get it???)//
Cuz I got the high-definition vision when I see my gucci sunglasses//

laugh.gif yeahhhhhhhhhhhh!!! I get it like the weather when it snows man.

QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Nov 18 2005, 9:19 PM)
Shit's cold, need warmth to protect my shit, cuz my breath is burning//

Get some dentyne ice.

QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Nov 18 2005, 9:19 PM)
Shit's cold, need warmth to protect my shit, cuz my breath is burning//
Reason why I 'Stay Fly' is because the white cash i'm earningggg// (THATSS RITE!)

I actually feel a Young Jeezy collabo coming.

QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Nov 18 2005, 9:19 PM)
If they say smoking gives you full cancer, just watch ya lungs explode!!//
Finished when the bullets soar in the air, pop and drop, and reload//

You bought some of that hot fire then. You want some of this hot fire?

QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Nov 18 2005, 9:19 PM)
Cuz the numbers after my name '61992' is the Kangsta's area code!!//

Man thats not your area code, that would be you zip code. whistling.gif But then again, it does tell what town you live in, so i guess it is an area code. _unsure.gif
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