Little girl with the flowered dress
The little girl with her flowered dress,
with her beady eyes that never rest.
Her mom's a druggie, her father's in jail,
her only friend's without a tail.
As a child she watched her sister slowly die,
yet she was not old enough to shed tears or cry.
If you look at her arms, and there you'll see
cuts and wounds where they aren't supposed to be.
Finally one day she could take no more pain,
no more tainted smiles or blood that fell like rain.
She pulled the trigger and ended her misery right there,
gone off to Heaven, with a smile she never got to wear.

Beautiful work. I got all choked up at the end It's perfect.

Ohmygod. I love it.

so do i
its so sad
im one of the people that thinks that life is very valuable

it's so sad...
i like it alot though esp. the ending

sorry double post

omg thats sooo sad!!!! its really good though!!!

^me too!

Thanks to everyone for all the feedback

Does your school have power of the pen? YOu'd do well their if they do and wonderful! Well not wonderful on how the end is, I mean the writing, gah it was sad but terribly well written (Did that make any sense? O.o)

^ I think I know what you mean lol. No I don't think my school has that program? Yeah, the ending is like the happily ever after for her.