Mouthed Words

my words mean nothing
and reflect off your heart
they fall on the floor,
the letters rip apart

so I dropped the conversation
and left you alone
to be the king of cold emotion
single handed on your throne

you closed my lips
and sewed them tight
i tried to breathe
but the world's out of sight...


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im bored all the time. i write like...alot.

That's awesome. I absolutely adore it.

thank you lol i adore comments...

It's really good.
It's not over done, it's a style that isn't used but by one or two people here. Length happens a lot.
I especially like the bit about "king of cold emotion"

I adore voters. Vote.
Seriously, I know people will read this. If you're posting topics in this section you should comment frequently. *Critisizing other's works and comparing them to your own help you to become a better writer. When you comment, the forum comes alive.

woo, i like the rhymes!

i love the first stanza