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takingbacksandy
my apologies if this is already posted. I usually dislike reading these, but I found this to be very sweet in a heart-touching way.


Once upon a time there was an island where all the feelings lived; happiness, sadness, knowledge, and all the others, including love. One day it was announced to all of the feelings that the island was going to sink to the bottom of the ocean. So all the feelings prepared their boats to leave. Love was the only one that stayed. She wanted to preserve the island paradise until the last possible moment. When the island was almost totally under love decided it was time to leave. She began looking for someone to ask for help. Just then Richness was passing by in a grand boat. Love asked, " Richness, Can I come with you on your boat? " Richness answered, " I`m sorry, but there is a lot of silver and gold on my boat and there would be no room for you anywhere. " Then Love decided to ask Vanity for help who was passing in a beautiful vessel. Love cried out, " Vanity, help me please. " " I can`t help you ", Vanity said, " You are all wet and will damage my beautiful boat. " Next, Love saw Sadness passing by. Love said, " Sadness, please let me go with you." Sadness answered, " Love, I`m sorry, but, I just need to be alone now. " Then, Love saw Happiness.Love cried out, " Happiness, please take me with you. " But Happiness was so overjoyed that he didn`t hear Love calling to him. Love began to cry. Then, she heard a voice say, " Come Love, I will take you with me. " It was an elder. Love felt so blessed and overjoyed that she forgot to ask the elder his name. When they arrived on land the elder went on his way. Love realized how much she owed the elder. Love then found Knowledge and asked, " Who was it that helped me? " " It was Time ", Knowledge answered. " But why did Time help me when no one else would? ", Love asked. Knowledge smiled and with deep wisdom and sincerity, and answered; " Because only Time is capable of understanding how great Love is.


i don't know who wrote this :\ but props to this person
mzkandi
Moved to writing
swtcherriipie
cute
takingbacksandy
OH i forgot to say i did not write this
mzkandi
^ Its ok...you can share pieces you didnt write

and swtcherriipie please dont spam.
danielle_x3
aww sandy, this is so cute. it's true as well
ParanoidAndroid
aww i love this.... it's a great consice story
Hiphop d[-_-]b
Thats sweet and deep. Took a few seconds for
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Because only Time is capable of understanding how great Love is.

To really sink in and hit me with the meaning of those words :D
o0olaalaa
awws
RiddleMeWonders
This is so cute. Thanks for sharing it.
miz_sunshine
aww...so sweet! It's so touching too.
iNyCxShoRT
That was a touching story. The last line made my jaw drop ohmy.gif
5ayuri
How cute.
I wonder who wrote it...
yukichan
its sooo cute..
and true..
tequila_sky
You know love comes in many forms and shapes. when I feel sad about someone I say 'I wanna be alone' to pple who really love me. :( This is so sweet.
realest
Aww. Haha, that was cute.
mipadi
I liked that. Very nice use of metaphor to make a point.
Soleil
Omgosh thats really good. It made me smile.
topsyturvy
Very very very true. I've seen it floating around the internet somewhere.. my email, possibly ermm.gif
misoshiru
aw i've read it before, but it's always just as touching.
toodlepops.
That made me say "awwww" out loud. That's really sweet
yourfriendsteph
this is super cute...everything ties together in a way i didnt expect. where didyou find this?
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