Retrogressive
Oct 7 2005, 02:11 PM
We are two souls desperatly clinging to one another.
We have been ragged and we have been torn.
And all I can do is hold on to you.
The wind blows through your apricot hair
and I silently wonder.
You grip the mast as we sail, beyond yonder.
I have no protection and you have no protector.
But I have your hand in mine.
And that's all I need, besides your heart.
rainnydaiis
Oct 7 2005, 05:01 PM
^ Hmm short and nice. I like these kind of poems. nicely done .
[Filp]Essence
Oct 8 2005, 09:31 AM
really retro
Retrogressive
Oct 10 2005, 08:23 PM
ha! thanks!
Actually, I made this one up rather quickly my good one is AS SUCH, it's in the forum somewhere...
iNyCxShoRT
Oct 14 2005, 08:39 PM
Simple, short, and sweet. I can almost see it happening. Great job on the peom and keep up the good work.
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