i know it's not good. i like it, though. as i lay dying meets from first to last. i hope when one hears it they simultaniously burst into tears and go berzerk.

OUR CRUMBLING PALACE
I have a habit of bad decisions
Along with a knack for ruining everything
These walls can't save us now
As they slowly but surely melt into the ground

Watch where you stand
I ruin everything
I swear to god
Slip out of my hands
I ruin everything
I swear to god

I try to hold the roof up
Protect us from our inevitable demise
Debris descending, you don't deserve this
Leave me here in my ruin. In our crumbling palace

Watch where you stand
I ruin everything
I swear to god
Slip out of my hands
I ruin everything
I swear to god

All of our dreams crashing down
All of our hopes falling down
All of our dreams crashing down
Everything collapses

From day one
I knew this would happen
I ruin everything
I swear to god

What are you talking about? Of course, it's good.

If I weren't on my uppers, I would have cried while reading this. I can totally relate to it.

The chorus is powerful, and I love this verse:


I got a good sense of imagery from it, and it's a great metaphor for this subject.

Wow. I really like this. What are you talking about?


I love those lines.

Wow, amazing. I love it! I love the word choice and the angst in this song. Very well written. As I Lay Dying <3

carpentry. duhhhh. sike. it's about breaking up even though you've had a really nice, long relationship, and no matter what you try to do to fix it and keep it it just dies anyway.

also, latley, personally i've been having trouble sticking to one girl to possibly like. so i get entangeled in all sorts of drama and i just isolate myself from it all, therefore hurting everyone i've ascociated with, and ruin everything. so the term "i ruin everything. i swear to god" has become something i say very often and i wanted to put it in a song.

No no. I meant what are you talking about saying this is not good.