I want to cry
But the tears won't come.
I closed myself for so long
I just don't know how to feel.
Emotions so held in,
Shut so tight ...
My hands are trembling,
Scattering all through my body,
But I still can't cry
Please let me cry

The lights are down,
The air is so cold.
I'm all alone with a pain
So unbearable that I want to die.
It won't make me leave it all behind
But I still can't cry
Please let me cry.

Sleepless nights,
Dry eyes so wide
To images of things I don't want to see
It's breaking me,
It's taking over me
But I still can't cry
Please let me cry.

I will do anything,
I will give anything,
Just let me cry
Please ...

Let me cry ...

there r so many days i feel like tat

I love this, really. Good job.

well written, i like it. i like the concept behind it too. keep up the nice work.

^love that part. exactly how i feel.

I think you did an amazing job with the poem and really expressed yourself here. You did a great job, and please keep writing

Omg..
That is exactly how I was feeling..
Everything you wrote, I felt the same thing..
scary..

I like the way you're pointing out your feelings,
Very well done, Its sad but nice.

so sad

Nice on how you poured yourself out in just a few words. Many people can relate to this I'm sure =P.

Nicely done with the wordings. I think they were put perfectly in place to get a full blast of the poem.

thats how i feel sometimes...