Red Tainted Darkness
By: Akiko (RoseOfBlackFlame)

Broken Hearted
Shattered Soul
Tattered Being
Dagger Plunged Right
To The Very Core
Of My Life

Crimson Red Slowly Flowing
Pushing Out Against
Ice-Cold Earth
Staining The Pure Colors
Of The Frozen Ground

It Starts To Slow
Darkness sets
Body’s Cold
Fear Seizes The Soul
As Terror Fills The Mind

Finally…
Soul Starts To Ease
Body Slowly Relaxes
As It Gives Into
The Very Darkness
That Stole It Into Fearing

Crimson Red Stops Flowing
As The Cool Ground
Stays Stained With
The Blood Red Color

Broken Hearted
Shattered Soul
Tattered Being
Dagger Plunged Right
To The Very Core
Of My Life.

this is really good
dark and morbid... my favorite

I love the imagery

don't know what else to say... loved it

Thanks. ^^' I was in a depressed mood... that's when I tend to write these.. >_o

^ Lovely poem. Your very descriptive on how it would look like if someone died. its an amazing piece =P