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mocassinsx29


NOT FINISHED YET, AS YOU CAN SEEE.
I mixed up the colors of the actual picture. But can you guess who it is?
I need to add a body, add hair and lip detail, and add an eye.
Open to critique but no "Omg, so ugly!!!" And no "more layers" because I have enough layers but I'm using subtle shading.


...And can you help me think of a better title?

Okay, I'm done. I managed to fit in some time for this between all my homework. It didn't come out exactly how I wanted, but you know, I'm done with it, never going back, finito.



Tips anyone? No criticism since I'm not going back, just tips for my next vector. Well... I guess that's sort of criticism. Bah, go wild.
Yufoo
Oh, I really like this so far! I can't wait to see it when it's finished!

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mind_of_its_own
I like it too. nice shading technique.
SandRAWRz
I see.....Avril Lagvine?
StanleyThePanda
Is it Avril?
anyways, I think it looks awesome
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cause wait to see it finished
YourSuperior
You did a great job on the skin and hair! Can't wait to see the finished product...
WindSorcerous
Wow! Amazing! ^_^
WindSorcerous
Wow! Amazing! ^_^
WindSorcerous
i have no idea why that appeated twice...
mocassinsx29
^ You can edit posts with the [edit] button on top of each of them. :)
And you guessed it, it's Avril. >_<
Thanks for the comments! happy.gif
sprezzatura
It's really nice. Keep on with the good work.
whooooshy
wow it looks GREAT so far! it looks like avril to me!
misoshiru
mm..yeah, it does look like avril. good job with the shading. i like it.
starlette
yeah, I don't see avril, but maybe thats because I don't like looking at avril, but I do like the vector. It looks pretty good! The iris and the pupil however seem like they need work. More depth and some light detail, but maybe you just arent done yet. so yeah. Looks great :D
OhXiet_ItzDonnA
Whoa, nice vector. I like the hair. I can't really think of a title....I cant see what would go with it. Nice work tho thumbsup.gif
seriouslynikki
It's great so far!
mocassinsx29
Okay, updated! I guess it doesn't look like Avril exactly because I got rid of her thick layer of black eye crap and made it smaller. Hrm...
JustAnotherTeenageLoser
The left eye (her right) looks a little small, & there could be some more contrast in the skin, but it looks great! Avril, isn't it? thumbsup.gif
luvzcha
awww... im so jealous!!!! pretty vector!!!
mai_z
Nice, her right eye is kind of wonky, and it would be good to add more depth in the hair and the shirt
hall0w
it loox really nice happy.gif
iheartjohn
Ooh, that's awesome. She looks really "cartoony" in comparison to other vectors.
mocassinsx29
QUOTE(mai_z @ Sep 18 2005, 10:02 AM)
Nice, her right eye is kind of wonky, and it would be good to add more depth in the hair and the shirt
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The shirt was completely black, so I couldn't see much detail. :( I added that little wrinkle from my imagination, rofl. I agree about the right eye though, it was covered with so much eye shadow and I didn't know how to make up the blank space, so it came out looking weirdish... pinch.gif
FreeStickers
I like it! Her right eye is a little small, though. You can't really see the nose...it looks like it's just skin. Other than those 2 things, I love it. I like the outline.
moorepocket
it's ok.

The lips are weird. There should be a line seperates the top from the bottom. Plus the top one should be darker.

The nose seems like it missing something. The left eye, too. I know it's from a turned-perspective.
haleakala1
ooh its beautiful!
azndev1l
very nice



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o0olaalaa
wow thats really awesome
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