I feel you slipping away again
Slipping right through my hands
Leaving and empty space in my heart.

The space I'd reserved for you.

Slipping away
I feel you
Slipping away
Ever so far away
I can feel you've gone.

You've left me empty handed
And alone to walk through
This unforgiving place we call home
Left me wandering aimlessly with an empty soul

You are now broken-heartedly unforgiven

I can feel you've slipped away
Leaving me here on my own to wander this
Unforgiving place we call home,
While you half-heartedly saunter away

Reminds me of a song..

it's cute. <3

Actually, I think it was supposed to be a song...

I've read a couple of your other poems, and now I have affirmed that you are an excellent writer. This song is wonderfully woven, showing the raw emotion of losing someone you held dear. If only it was a tad bit longer, and a bit more revised. But other than that, I love it.

Ha. Me, an excellent writer?

Okay,

Thanks ^.^

I agree with Lauren. You are an excellent writer.

You're def. not a boring read, that's for sure.

(unlike some people)

*cough* me *cough*

Aww. This poem's pretty good. Sometimes I feel that way too.
Agreed;; you're a good writer.

I like it..Its really plain and simple..