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sikdragon
What's Missing

As i sit in silence, i begin to wonder-

do i make you laugh?
do i make you think?
do i make you smile?
then what's missing-

do i make you remember?
do i make you forget?
do i make you wish?
so tell me what's left?

do i make you happy?
do i make you sad?
do i get you angry?
do i make you mad?

what else is there to make you fall for me?
I'm all the things anyone could ever want-
or so it seems you've got other needs-
don't i make you who you want to be?
don't i clear your eyes so that you can see?
Tell me, tell me, do i make you...

do i make you laugh?
do i make you think?
do i make you smile?
then what's missing-

do i make you remember?
do i make you forget?
do i make you wish?
so tell me what's left?

i begin to wonder-

do i make you happy?
do i make you sad?
do i get you angry?
do i make you mad?

As i sit in silence, i begin to wonder-
moorepocket
bad break up? Anyway, it's good. I like it.
Paradox of Life
Very nice. I think the ending could've been better, but I just loooove the whole theme of the poem. Well done!
torngemini
that was soo nice!! is it a poem or a song? I think that would make a great great song!
sikdragon
It's gonna be a song. I'm working on getting a band together. I'm kind of excited.

Yeah, it was kind of a bad break up.
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