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 Aug 8 2006, 02:16 PM
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 ghostbuster famous  Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 420,197  |
this one is a little better. i added a texture, and this was actually my first time using and texture :P. and i added a little bit of brushes
emmy rossum i'm actually quite satisfied 
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Aug 8 2006, 02:19 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,480 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 444,349 |
aww its cute!! really good i think but i dont know much lol!!
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Aug 8 2006, 05:29 PM
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It looks like you used a grungy texture for this. Maybe try a light simple texture. The font to me looks a bit tacky. Try to cut out your images a bit smoother so they don't look choppy. But I must say you really improved from the last one. Nice job.
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Aug 8 2006, 07:00 PM
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try adding more images, and overlapping most of them,change someof their angles too, but looks good
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Aug 8 2006, 07:24 PM
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t-t-t-toyaaa Group: Official Member Posts: 19,821 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,270 |
QUOTE(aeroplane. @ Aug 8 2006, 3:29 PM)  It looks like you used a grungy texture for this. Maybe try a light simple texture. The font to me looks a bit tacky. Try to cut out your images a bit smoother so they don't look choppy. But I must say you really improved from the last one. Nice job. Agreed. Except the part about the last one, because I didn't see that. But yea the texture looks too grungy, and it makes the images look horrible quality too. The girl on the right (huge one) is really choppy. But not bad. |
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Aug 8 2006, 07:25 PM
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ghostbuster famous Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 420,197 |
thanks all of you
 and yeah i just looked at it and realized how little i spent cutting that image out O_O
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Aug 8 2006, 10:54 PM
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 the name is ada. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,688 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,608 |
I think you should overlap them more.Other than that,I like.
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Aug 9 2006, 09:20 AM
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 I intend to live forever-so far, so good. Group: Member Posts: 2,820 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,137 |
^yeah, since there is a lot of empty space in the bg. I'm personally not a big fan of repeating images >< Also, when half of a person's body is cut off, don't cover it with astrip of color. Instead put another picture on top of the half that's missing. Also (from experience) I find that collages are hard to do when you have a lot of space to fill up (with a large canvas..) so it's easier when you start off wth.. about 700x300px or so
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Aug 9 2006, 09:38 AM
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OMgosh she's so pretty!
Anyway, I love the pink pattern in the back, and great improvement from last time! It looks like everyone else covered anything I'd like to say.. it'd be stupid to type it again
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Aug 10 2006, 12:44 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 277 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 172,698 |
I think you should start by saving .jpeg or .png instead of .gif.
Good improvment, just put the cutouts closer together.\ and use a less grungy texture |
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Aug 10 2006, 10:22 PM
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 & my dreams fall down Group: Member Posts: 1,173 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 291,336 |
Keep practicing, but you did improve from your first try.
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