Is this Love?, By Jessica |
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 Mar 22 2006, 08:02 PM
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 who ma bitch? you ma bitch, bitch.  Group: Member Posts: 1,849 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,278  |
Is this Love?
The love I have for you Is more than I can handle I think about you everyday It feels like I will go insane What a great sensation It is to go walking down the street With my head in the clouds And the ground barely touching my feet I can hear the sweet songs The birds are singing Even while walking On a street full of cars beeping And when I close my eyes I can feel my own heart beating While I think about you Your eyes Your smile Your arms around me tight If I truly am in love Will this feeling last my whole life? |
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Mar 22 2006, 08:13 PM
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victim of myspace.com Group: Member Posts: 377 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,435 |
I like this, you really held your reader's attention.
I'm a fan of your writing xD |
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Mar 22 2006, 08:38 PM
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who ma bitch? you ma bitch, bitch. Group: Member Posts: 1,849 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,278 |
^ aww
 I HAVE A FAN!!!  lol thanks so much hun you made me feel better about my writting
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Mar 22 2006, 08:58 PM
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victim of myspace.com Group: Member Posts: 377 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,435 |
YAY I MADE YOU HAPPY!!!
My day is done. I made someone happy! But you are a great writer - be proud! |
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