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ayumi hamasaki
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post Mar 10 2006, 04:39 PM
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i'm making this for a xanga layout, please no critique, just some strong suggestions.
Click Here! What do you think about it?
 
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post Mar 10 2006, 06:32 PM
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zipped.gif no critique from me lol
maybe a set blogging area, like bordered?!?! i know nothing when it comes to layouts
 
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post Mar 10 2006, 06:38 PM
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Yep, not sure where the blogging area will be. Sorry, I'm not sure what to say - usually strong suggestions come in the form a 'critique.' pinch.gif
 
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post Mar 10 2006, 07:04 PM
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Oh!
It looks beautiful!
The only thing I dislike it the font you used for "summer days" it just doesn't fit, but other than that it looks AWESOME!!!!
 
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post Mar 10 2006, 07:09 PM
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Whoa, so bright! I'm not really feeling the pink-ish purple, but I like the idea of the splats or whatever that is. I don't see where the blog would be, either. Otherwise, everything else looks fine. _smile.gif
 
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post Mar 10 2006, 07:52 PM
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QUOTE(Zatanna @ Mar 10 2006, 5:38 PM) *
Yep, not sure where the blogging area will be.

top left lol i juss meant that you should define the area
 
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post Mar 10 2006, 08:32 PM
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It's nice, but the only things I'd say you could change are the fonts and the tranparency between ayumi. The fonts are hard to read. pinch.gif c&c. You did a good job though. =]
 
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post Mar 10 2006, 09:59 PM
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That's so cute.
I really like the colors.
 
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post Mar 10 2006, 10:08 PM
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OMG PLEASE FINISH!!!! NO CRITIQUE AYUMI HAMASAKI IS f**king AWESOME!!!!! worthy.gif dance.gif music.gif
 
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post Mar 10 2006, 10:30 PM
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I think I'll edit this, because I like all of your suggestions. Thanks. _smile.gif
Someone, please suggest a good font for the text - Summer Days. Just PM, so I can get a response ASAP.
 
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post Mar 10 2006, 11:59 PM
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Wow looks really good!
 
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post Mar 11 2006, 01:28 AM
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Thanks a lot. I'm thinking of submitting more graphics as of now. Now I wonder if my icon i submitted was accepted hopefully. happy.gif

QUOTE(skp86 @ Mar 10 2006, 7:04 PM) *
Oh!
It looks beautiful!
The only thing I dislike it the font you used for "summer days" it just doesn't fit, but other than that it looks AWESOME!!!!

I sort of like that font steffie, thanks though. A couple of people I showed on AIM had now problem. wink.gif
 
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post Mar 11 2006, 01:08 PM
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Ooh, I like everything about this layout right down to the colours, but I see a tiny flaw with it. The 'Summer Days' text was sort of just out there, and it really didn't go along with the whole effect you were trying to create. Hm, maybe change the text to a more cursive-y font, such as Carpenters ICG? _smile.gif
I like it in general, though.
 
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post Mar 11 2006, 03:23 PM
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thats awesome, i lvoe the colros an brushes you used, i agree with steffie about the font of summer days
 
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post Mar 11 2006, 04:02 PM
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Ok, I change my mind. It's starting to bug me when i know people know how it can be improve, thanks. Carpenter icg? I have it, but what other fonts would look good too?

im not using this as a layout anymore. maybe it could just be wallpaper. I'm almost done.
 

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