Borred as Fcuk.. 4 AM, Drop feed please Rating Options

[deteam]

mad random but w.e.



Leave Feedback / what i should do with this shyt

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[creole]

her skin looks a bit too fake.

[jiyong]

Image has been deleted..?

[deteam]

Image has been deleted..?

fixed

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[Mickey]

Besides your relatively okay use of colours, that looks ridiculous. The rainbow's all jagged and shitty. The tree and grass are really low in quality. It's as if you made no effort to make the brushes flow with the piece and just slapped them on there. The lines connected to them look out of place. Your cropping also needs work. Worst of all is your choice of fonts. That script font is terrible. Together with Times New Roman? Awful. You'd probably be better off just having the babe alone.

If you're bored at 4AM, go to sleep. Don't waste your time making shit like this. Practice your skills when you're totally awake and focused.

[nyaa---]

imo shit

[manny-the-dino]

I 100% second Mike's response. Those silhouette backgrounds are so overdone. There's a lot going on in her bikini and with all that's going on in the background makes it too busy. Tone down the effects a bit.

[tokyo-rose]

I think you should use a totally different background.

[deteam]

Besides your relatively okay use of colours, that looks ridiculous. The rainbow's all jagged and shitty. The tree and grass are really low in quality. It's as if you made no effort to make the brushes flow with the piece and just slapped them on there. The lines connected to them look out of place. Your cropping also needs work. Worst of all is your choice of fonts. That script font is terrible. Together with Times New Roman? Awful. You'd probably be better off just having the babe alone.

If you're bored at 4AM, go to sleep. Don't waste your time making shit like this. Practice your skills when you're totally awake and focused.

haha funny since all that shyt that u pointed out being wrong ... was all part of the b.g. which was one layer that i foudn as a stock lol... at 4 am u expect me 2 make any of that shyt lol all i did was throw on a render, a couple gradient maps, and sum text.... critique the shyt i did . . and i know the text is bad lol im never good with typography

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[technicolour]

All the more reason why you should sleep at 4AM; your judgment is totally impaired. You picked a horribly low quality "stock" background, which of course we expected you to have made it since your claiming it to be your creation, with lack of credit, and combined bad and bad to only create worse.

Sleep at 4AM, practice during the day when you're semi coherent. That is my critique and what I recommend.

[Mickey]

haha funny since all that shyt that u pointed out being wrong ... was all part of the b.g. which was one layer that i foudn as a stock lol... at 4 am u expect me 2 make any of that shyt lol all i did was throw on a render, a couple gradient maps, and sum text.... critique the shyt i did . . and i know the text is bad lol im never good with typography

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I did critique the shit you did. It is shit. The background is so shit, I mistook it for your work too. You can't just slap a half-naked girl onto a background and expect nice feedback. Ha, doesn't work that way mate.

[mipadi]

Sleep at 4AM, practice during the day when you're semi coherent. That is my critique and what I recommend.

Naw. I say, stay up; subliminal creativity will occur.

[creole]

Maybe subliminal sleeps in the daytime and he's a nocturnal person?

Idk, it is common sense to have enough energy to do an activity ( yeah, graphic designing is an activity xD )

And one way way to improve and sharpen your designs is by examining pictures you like by other designers. you can even ask them how they did it if it makes you feel better. oh, and also try to look at tutorials and guides on certain effects and experiment around. i highly recommend looking through font guides / what to do & what not to do, etc.

[deteam]

haha 4got . . . can only post up work here that ive actually put time into lol . . . shyt was not serious or 4 a client... relax lol

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[creole]

You should still give credit, because sometimes designers can be a bit...bitchy.

[Maccabee]

Sooo, pretty much you didn't do anything. And the 1-2 things you did do look terrible. And would you stop saying 'shyt.' It's not a word.

[deteam]

Sooo, pretty much you didn't do anything. And the 1-2 things you did do look terrible. And would you stop saying 'shyt.' It's not a word.

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[technicolour]

Naw. I say, stay up; subliminal creativity will occur.

To those who know what they're doing to begin with. I made my current wallpaper at 2 in the morning and I freaking love it so, *shrug*.

[deteam]

To those who know what they're doing to begin with. I made my current wallpaper at 2 in the morning and I freaking love it so, *shrug*.

and we love you 2

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[Mickey]

Poor sod. Kristina, would you mind elaborating? LMAO.

[karmakiller]

Damn, she's a giant. Look at how much bigger she is than that shitty looking tree.

[technicolour]

Poor sod. Kristina, would you mind elaborating? LMAO.

This is probably just my warped logic, but when you know what you're doing when you're coherent, then when you're semi/not coherent that really allows your mind to soar. You already have the skills to where you can do whatever. Kind of like you have to know the rules of art to break them? But when you don't know what you're doing and you're attempting to do it when you're not coherent, crap will be made because you didn't know what you were doing in the first place.




And yes, everyone does love me. Note the witty sarcasm.

[Cyanide-]

Wow. You're all assholes.

[deteam]

Wow. You're all assholes.

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