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 Mar 22 2006, 12:07 AM
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 who ma bitch? you ma bitch, bitch.  Group: Member Posts: 1,849 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,278  |
Dreams
I had dreams About what I would be I would be a teacher A writer An artist A singer! So many things that A silly child would dream But now as I sit in this grey old smelly cubicle I think back to those silly little dreams O where where did my life go wrong? Why am I now working for this grumpy old boss? What am I now? I am a sad little man That will spend the rest of his days in a Grey old smelly cubicle That only sells harmful chemicals What am I really now? I am a shadow That once had dreams A shadow that thinks back to a child’s silly little dreams. |
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Mar 22 2006, 01:55 PM
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 wut wut in the butt? Group: Human Posts: 2,335 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 227,723 |
kinda sad, but i really did love it. good job :]
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Mar 22 2006, 04:02 PM
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 That really made me lose hope. I wanted to become a brain surgeon but after reading that poem.... But I loved it. It sounded nice ^_^ |
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Mar 22 2006, 04:10 PM
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Nice poem! =D have you ever tried writing a poem book and publishing it? xD you never know, you might get it published for the whole world to see
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Mar 22 2006, 04:13 PM
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What dose it smell like? JUST WONDERING!?!?!?
Nice peace of work :-) |
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Mar 22 2006, 07:16 PM
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victim of myspace.com Group: Member Posts: 377 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 386,435 |
I like that-
Sometimes people's heads are in the clouds, and just need a little reminder of how reailty is. |
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Mar 22 2006, 07:57 PM
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who ma bitch? you ma bitch, bitch. Group: Member Posts: 1,849 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,278 |
QUOTE(Blow_Don't_SUCK @ Mar 22 2006, 1:02 PM)  That really made me lose hope. I wanted to become a brain surgeon but after reading that poem.... But I loved it. It sounded nice ^_^ awww this poem is suppose to inspire you your not suppose to give up on your dreams the man in this poem did give up on them so he is stuck for the rest of his life in the smelly old cubicle dont give up on you dreams or youll end up like him 
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