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Jul 30 2004, 10:37 AM
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![]() TheQuietThingsNoOneEverKnows ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 75 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 35,721 |
Fear without hate
Love without passion Was it so great Or was is doomed for ashes A sky without birds A stain without mess A voice without words Getting more yet so less.. A hell without fire A want without greed A need without desire Progress without succeed A rose without thorns A day without light A scar without scorns Struggle without fight Decption without warning A shadow out of darkness Not waking to a new morning Close yet so endless A man without soul Overcome by lust A part, not whole Defeated without trust.. |
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Jul 30 2004, 03:28 PM
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ohh gosh no ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 86 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,892 |
Wow, i really like this poem you wrote, its really good. I'd like to read more of your work!
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