rap *new and fresh*, i knocked ya out on this 1 baby |
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| *Statistik* |
 May 3 2005, 10:37 PM
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Not copied. I promise. Enjoy..hope i get good remarks this TIME
 KANGSTA! HAHA!!!! HISTORY IN DA MAKIN U MOTHA f**kers!! I will admit last rap I used a line from Cassidy Im a hustla so is that any reason for you to start Harassing me You CB haters can hate but you no its all good I will hit you so hard you will see more stars than hollywood Im like a nightmare 4 those who oppose my style Give you the Midas touch so call me the Golden Child Just call me trident because your girl can chew on this Do you like death and make you cease to exist Its me people I stand tall and stand firm And do you like voters and eliminate you like a president going for his second term Its so FUN with those who I STUN Because they say I suck and im DONE but yet continue to RESPOND NOPE! Im superb and bring fire like a gun My flow is so spectacular like a taser that it will leave you stunned So im going to continue to just do it like NIKE Those who say they hate me know they really LIKE ME Its me Jason I got it locked MOS DEF And if you don’t feel this then you ain’t feeling yourself |
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May 3 2005, 10:39 PM
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 I come from East Oakland where the youngstas get hyphy!  Group: Member Posts: 1,821 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 102,942 |
nice. keep doin what you do. and just always remember to stay original. as for the haters, just brush em off.
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May 3 2005, 10:55 PM
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exactly
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May 3 2005, 10:57 PM
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Bardic Nation Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059 |
yeah i aint feeling on myself. ya girl doin it for me.
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May 4 2005, 04:55 PM
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OMG Jason you killed this one man. Unbelievable.
QUOTE You CB haters can hate but you no its all good I will hit you so hard you will see more stars than hollywood That is the coldest line i have heard anyone rap on CB QUOTE Just call me trident because your girl can chew on this Do you like death and make you cease to exist The Trident line was just unexpected but very brilliant QUOTE Its me Jason I got it locked MOS DEF And if you don’t feel this then you ain’t feeling yourself That was Nasty Way to come back Jason. You Never give up no matter how many people criticize. Keep doing your thing. |
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May 4 2005, 05:03 PM
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 °¤*Kandii Giirl*¤° Group: Member Posts: 202 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 128,876 |
Better than your other one.
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May 4 2005, 05:35 PM
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i gotta say this is the best rap you wrote gj
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May 4 2005, 06:02 PM
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 wanderlust personified. Group: Official Designer Posts: 7,515 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 797 |
where'd u steal these lines from?
*goes to investigate* |
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May 4 2005, 06:06 PM
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I DIDNT..
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May 4 2005, 07:46 PM
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 The Secret Hacker. Group: Member Posts: 1,780 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,712 |
ur perservence is amazing.
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May 4 2005, 08:24 PM
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QUOTE(xquizit @ May 4 2005, 6:02 PM) where'd u steal these lines from? *goes to investigate*  haha, roxy, you never cease to speak for me...
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May 4 2005, 08:31 PM
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 Holla if ya hate me Group: Member Posts: 2,386 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 80,819 |
Damn... that was actually pretty good. Like KC said those lines just killed... props kid props
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May 4 2005, 08:34 PM
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not as good as yall say it is... even if it wasnt bitten
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May 4 2005, 08:52 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
Wow, that was okay, but it's probably because I'm comparing it to all your other terrible rhymes. I googled it and it seems like you didn't copy off someone for a change. For some reason though, it seems like too miraculous a comeback. Did someone write this for you? It seems more literate than you usually write too and about 50x better. How could possibly do this good in the short time it was since your last topic? And there's nowhere near as much hostility. Hmmm...
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May 4 2005, 11:17 PM
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 reluctantly gazing Group: Member Posts: 472 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 120,555 |
this was okay i guess. never really read your other ones, and this one isn't that bad.
i gotta say ive seen the critique on your other ones though, and im surprised that you're still writing these persistently. |
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May 5 2005, 09:02 AM
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wanderlust personified. Group: Official Designer Posts: 7,515 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 797 |
QUOTE(AkaRyux @ May 4 2005, 8:52 PM) Wow, that was okay, but it's probably because I'm comparing it to all your other terrible rhymes. I googled it and it seems like you didn't copy off someone for a change. For some reason though, it seems like too miraculous a comeback. Did someone write this for you? It seems more literate than you usually write too and about 50x better. How could possibly do this good in the short time it was since your last topic? And there's nowhere near as much hostility. Hmmm... Yeah, I don't buy it either. Come on Jason, you can't fool us. |
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May 5 2005, 07:05 PM
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wow. so much better than all the other crap you posted.
that trident line was classic. i'm impressed now. although the skeptics are making me a tad suspicious... good job. |
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May 5 2005, 07:33 PM
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Holla if ya hate me Group: Member Posts: 2,386 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 80,819 |
QUOTE(AkaRyux @ May 4 2005, 8:52 PM) Wow, that was okay, but it's probably because I'm comparing it to all your other terrible rhymes. I googled it and it seems like you didn't copy off someone for a change. For some reason though, it seems like too miraculous a comeback. Did someone write this for you? It seems more literate than you usually write too and about 50x better. How could possibly do this good in the short time it was since your last topic? And there's nowhere near as much hostility. Hmmm... Hmm... yeah I was thinking the exact same thing, maybe someone did write it for him. I mean, it is way better then all his other bull. . . googled it, yahood it and came up with nothing... just way too suspicious 
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May 5 2005, 07:49 PM
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Bardic Nation Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059 |
someone should check kalistyle.
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May 10 2005, 06:19 PM
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 ticktock. Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,235 |
even though you didnt bite off anything from the internet. .
i have a hard time believing that you wrote it. o_O it just doesnt sound like anything that you would write |
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May 11 2005, 12:20 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
QUOTE(Jason61992 @ May 3 2005, 7:37 PM) Not copied. I promise. Enjoy..hope i get good remarks this TIME KANGSTA! HAHA!!!! HISTORY IN DA MAKIN U MOTHA f**kers!! I will admit last rap I used a line from Cassidy Im a hustla so is that any reason for you to start Harassing me ^^ok opener You CB haters can hate but you no its all good I will hit you so hard you will see more stars than hollywood ^^ LOL good line Im like a nightmare 4 those who oppose my style Give you the Midas touch so call me the Golden Child ^^ word it better Just call me trident because your girl can chew on this Do you like death and make you cease to exist ^^strong line Its me people I stand tall and stand firm And do you like voters and eliminate you like a president going for his second term ^^its ok Its so FUN with those who I STUN Because they say I suck and im DONE but yet continue to RESPOND ^^ hah true personnal NOPE! Im superb and bring fire like a gun My flow is so spectacular like a taser that it will leave you stunned ^^ aiight So im going to continue to just do it like NIKE Those who say they hate me know they really LIKE ME ^^ ok Its me Jason I got it locked MOS DEF And if you don’t feel this then you ain’t feeling yourself ^^ your closer wasnt as strong as ur other lines well people here are still tryin to look for if ur sh*t is copied but if yah didnt then its all good..XD hah this doode never gives up looks like ur provin them wrong good sh*t |
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May 11 2005, 12:29 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 913 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 101,212 |
Well I commend you on your perseverence.
 It was ehhh, but it was ok. Keep trying!
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May 11 2005, 04:15 PM
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 This bitch better work! Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 13,681 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 28,095 |
no...just no.
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May 11 2005, 07:19 PM
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 Residential Crazy Child Group: Member Posts: 934 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 116,897 |
QUOTE where'd u steal these lines from? *goes to investigate* u still gotta win over roxanne As for me, I'm very impressed by your spirit. Nothing puts you down. *does paula abdul clap* You've made quite an improvement. |
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May 11 2005, 10:11 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 2,172 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 34,045 |
QUOTE(basick @ May 4 2005, 5:34 PM) not as good as yall say it is... even if it wasnt bitten i agree .. anyone can think up punchlines .. but APPLYING IT to yourself as a rapper and your personality is more difficult .. |
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