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| *Statistik* |
 Mar 12 2005, 11:59 AM
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f**k all the haters,
I be twistin bitches alot, have em sit on this cock I wasn't prepared for this, I wrote my shit on the spot I be droppin like early August, late July Wit tracks that'll make you cry, hate you die Stop frontin, you got no dough, might a had, but not no mo' You mad cuz I knocked yo' hoe While cops watch me, I got cats that watch po-po My block loco, don't need a crew I rock solo Or wit my nigga Gruff These faggot niggas ain't as rich as us I need chicks to lust, smoke my weed mixed wit dust Go ahead and let your crew soup you up In the ambulance, gon' have to come and scoop you up f**k wit my last soul, my new shit is goin past gold And if you don't agree, you's a a-hole Mark my word, you gon' make me pump the bird never hesitate to bump my gun Kangsta World, y'all know where the f**k I'm from I got two guns on my both hands i reboot it before i shoot it dont f**k wif me bitch this is createblog yeah the home of the dead f**k what they said it dosent hurt me nor does it offend me The game of life, got ups and downs, downs and ups Kingpin cats lose they crowns in cuffs Yeah chinks rap too, but still got them pies on the block Bitches lookin at the size of my rocks, size of my knotts Keep a stash box, ride wit them glocks -Kangsta still sucks? or improvement shown? |
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Mar 12 2005, 01:50 PM
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 The Secret Hacker.  Group: Member Posts: 1,780 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,712 |
....... ur not kangsta nor gangsta. improvement not shown and u need to listen to some kpop.
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Mar 12 2005, 02:07 PM
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 Holla if ya hate me Group: Member Posts: 2,386 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 80,819 |
No improvement at all kid.
Kid what did I tell you? Stop! With raps like that, you have no chance what-so-ever. You talk about shit that you have never been through... like you said Jason.. "dont front" |
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Mar 12 2005, 05:16 PM
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 HAAAAAAAA. Group: Member Posts: 4,472 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 75,068 |
Stop with the raps.
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Mar 12 2005, 07:58 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
AhaHhaha HaH haha Ha HA aH ahhaH aHha h AH h aH aHh Ah AH haAHha hah HAhahAH hah aH AH ha haH AH ha.
Okay, sorry. QUOTE ....... ur not kangsta nor gangsta. improvement not shown and u need to listen to some kpop. Agreed. Maybe you should write a rap that has a point to it. It just sounds like you're saying "f*ck this, f*ck that" to everything. That really has no point to it. |
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| *wind&fire* |
Mar 12 2005, 10:08 PM
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hmmm... change you image... or dont post you photo so people wont laff at you so hard
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Mar 13 2005, 02:24 AM
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 Live Your Own Party Group: Member Posts: 1,261 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,489 |
Okay, hun, you know.. I'm that type of person who tries to be nice to people and not to be rude, but all you're doing is spitting off crap to other people you are THE BIGGEST poser I have met in my entrie life. You think you're all ghetto when you live in the burbs of Jersey.
I also think that it's great to do something that you're passionate about. So... keep rapping. Just... don't make a fool out of yourself by showing it to other people.  
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Mar 13 2005, 12:12 PM
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 dakishimetainoni... Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,322 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 75,318 |
http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=twistin&r=f
QUOTE 1. Twistin Twist the pizzie (pipe) as you smoke ice. The rolling effect allows the liquid to smoke better so that you get a bigger hit. 2. twistin Layin' down rhymes. We be straight up lyric twistin', dawg umm...so you lay down rhymes on a b*tch or roll up them up...? 
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Mar 13 2005, 01:35 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 4,357 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 28,115 |
Dr. Seuss has raps better than you.
And he doesn't even rap. I think you should stop now before you get jumped. You said "f**k" like 6 times, and u're just using too much profanity even though u're 12. |
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Mar 13 2005, 04:43 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,191 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 23,660 |
QUOTE(AzNxJenny91 @ Mar 13 2005, 10:35 AM) Dr. Seuss has raps better than you. And he doesn't even rap.  lmao yeh, still sucks. no improvement shown. |
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Mar 13 2005, 05:09 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 961 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,057 |
i think f**k is the only bad word he knowS?
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Mar 13 2005, 11:09 PM
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 asdfghjkl; Group: Member Posts: 187 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 104,038 |
QUOTE(JC4P @ Mar 13 2005, 2:09 PM) i think f**k is the only bad word he knowS? agreed |
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| *wind&fire* |
Mar 14 2005, 12:47 AM
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he said vagina before
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Mar 15 2005, 04:53 AM
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 Bardic Nation Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059 |
the funny thing is, it's about being real. You tryin to be. f**k these faggots that be hatin. Dont ask to get better. Dont ask for opinion. f**k them. That's the point of rap. You lay it out. But seriously tho if you gonna be real. be real. Dont try to be the image of a kangsta or whatever that is. Be you. They laugh cuz you're self-conscious. If you put it out there dont ask for if you did better. That says that you think it sucks. What people appreciate is confidence. in the words of that white faggot, "f**k all y'all if you doubt me, im a mutha f**kin piece of white trash, i say it proudly." thats how you should be. not white trash, but proud regardless.
You had a good flow to start, but you screwed it up at the end. I dunno why the hell anybody would wanna be gangsta, its just a wannabe gangster. The only reason they aint gangster cuz they too pansy-assed worried about gettin shot or thrown in jail. Gangster doesnt get caught. Gangsta is hot-headed and loves the law. Funnier thing, white people trying to be black people who trying to be whoppers, who tryin to be irish. and then oriental people trying to be white people trying to be black people trying to be whoppers, trying to be irish. It's sad. This only to the faggots who fit the stereotype. do you?(you is generalized) |
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Mar 15 2005, 04:59 AM
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 wanderlust personified. Group: Official Designer Posts: 7,515 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 797 |
QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Mar 12 2005, 11:59 AM) f**k all the haters, I be twistin bitches alot, have em sit on this cock I wasn't prepared for this, I wrote my shit on the spot I be droppin like early August, late July Wit tracks that'll make you cry, hate you die Stop frontin, you got no dough, might a had, but not no mo' You mad cuz I knocked yo' hoe While cops watch me, I got cats that watch po-po My block loco, don't need a crew I rock solo Or wit my nigga Gruff These faggot niggas ain't as rich as us I need chicks to lust, smoke my weed mixed wit dust Go ahead and let your crew soup you up In the ambulance, gon' have to come and scoop you up f**k wit my last soul, my new shit is goin past gold And if you don't agree, you's a a-hole Mark my word, you gon' make me pump the bird never hesitate to bump my gun Kangsta World, y'all know where the f**k I'm from I got two guns on my both hands i reboot it before i shoot it dont f**k wif me bitch this is createblog yeah the home of the dead f**k what they said it dosent hurt me nor does it offend me The game of life, got ups and downs, downs and ups Kingpin cats lose they crowns in cuffs Yeah chinks rap too, but still got them pies on the block Bitches lookin at the size of my rocks, size of my knotts Keep a stash box, ride wit them glocks -Kangsta still sucks? or improvement shown? Wow Jason. That was pretty good... Cuz it wasn't you. You have stooped to an all new low. Did you really think no one would catch this? http://www.ohhla.com/anonymous/rap_comp/th...ny_free.the.txt ^ Check it out ya'll. Those aren't Jason's lyrics. |
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| *stephinika* |
Mar 15 2005, 09:19 AM
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^^
wow. thats just ridiculous.
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Mar 15 2005, 08:57 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,575 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,957 |
QUOTE(AzNxJenny91 @ Mar 13 2005, 10:35 AM) Dr. Seuss has raps better than you. And he doesn't even rap. rotf. agreed. what's pathetic is you steal raps, and people STILL hate on you when they don't know it's stolen. that's how much people dislike your attempts at rapping. |
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Mar 15 2005, 09:09 PM
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 I have no life Group: Member Posts: 1,119 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,675 |
^ correcto
Hey, at least you didn't steal this one...thats why it sucked even more edit// o hey, u did steal it....write your own....maybe it will be better....*snicker*...Rofl http://www.getlyrics.com/lyrics.php/Union/...#39;s+Freestyle |
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Mar 16 2005, 12:51 AM
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QUOTE(xquizit @ Mar 15 2005, 8:59 PM) Wow Jason. That was pretty good... Cuz it wasn't you. You have stooped to an all new low. Did you really think no one would catch this? http://www.ohhla.com/anonymous/rap_comp/th...ny_free.the.txt ^ Check it out ya'll. Those aren't Jason's lyrics. i was just about to google it |
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Mar 16 2005, 04:17 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
QUOTE(xquizit @ Mar 15 2005, 4:59 AM) Wow Jason. That was pretty good... Cuz it wasn't you. You have stooped to an all new low. Did you really think no one would catch this? http://www.ohhla.com/anonymous/rap_comp/th...ny_free.the.txt ^ Check it out ya'll. Those aren't Jason's lyrics. lol that's a no-no Jason, you can't just steal raps from other sites and claim them as ur own. But try sitting down and writing somethan of ur own..inspired by things that really happened in ur own life. ya know? |
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Mar 16 2005, 10:13 PM
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dakishimetainoni... Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,322 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 75,318 |
QUOTE(xquizit @ Mar 15 2005, 4:59 AM) Wow Jason. That was pretty good... Cuz it wasn't you. You have stooped to an all new low. Did you really think no one would catch this? http://www.ohhla.com/anonymous/rap_comp/th...ny_free.the.txt ^ Check it out ya'll. Those aren't Jason's lyrics.  i can't believe you did that... and to think that i was going to say something encouraging to you
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Mar 16 2005, 10:17 PM
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 Can't have the hand without the cock. Group: Member Posts: 2,481 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,622 |
QUOTE(xquizit @ Mar 14 2005, 11:59 PM) Wow Jason. That was pretty good... Cuz it wasn't you. You have stooped to an all new low. Did you really think no one would catch this? http://www.ohhla.com/anonymous/rap_comp/th...ny_free.the.txt ^ Check it out ya'll. Those aren't Jason's lyrics. AHAHAHAHAHAHA. damn kiddo, i never thought you could sink anymore lower. lmao. |
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| *basick* |
Mar 16 2005, 10:26 PM
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thats f**king ssad man.. biting off some wack dude
LMAO |
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Mar 17 2005, 12:12 AM
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 Wow, i dont know whats going on... Group: Member Posts: 1,439 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,977 |
Wow thats sad, and if those were your lyrics, your just a 50 cent rip off.
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Mar 26 2005, 01:45 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,746 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 52,931 |
what has the world come to?!
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